I lay intoxicated but still of sound mind.
Watching the screen with half open senses.
Then,
I feel it.
The brush of skin on skin,
But I'm not sure if I imagined it or not.
Then,
I feel it again.
Barely a touch running across the bare skin of my shoulders.
Soft as the breeze,
Gentle and light as a feather,
But I can still feel it.
And a knot of fear appears in my stomach,
But also the warm,
Fluttery feeling of arousal.
The touch continues on my shoulders,
Then on my waist.
A hand caresses my leg harder then the touch before,
But still gentle and scarily intimate.
The person lying behind me is a friend who I thought I could trust,
But intoxication and the temptation of warm flesh only inches away,
Is too much for the intoxicated.
My stomach clenches,
My heart slams in my chest with fear.
The sound of his breathing is in my ear,
And I feel his gaze on me.
I lay still,
Half praying that he'll stop,
Half hoping that he won't.
I close my eyes and try to block it all out,
To ignore the feelings crashing inside of me like the stormy sea.
I feel him lean forward to look at me from over my shoulder,
And slow my breathing,
Faking that I'm asleep.
He chuckled and the touches stopped.
But the memory of it all,
Haunts me.
Each touch is like a ghost in my mind that can't be destroyed.
Never again will I feel the same friendship we used to have.
This will haunt me forever and make my heart kick in fear.
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I actually had this happen to me last night.
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[link] please come visit
Check out my other work if you like.
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Yeah, though I walk through the valley of the Shadow of Death, I shall fear no evil, for yeah I am the meanest bitch in the valley....
Break this bittersweet spell on me
Lost in the arms of destiny!
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[link] please come visit
He's STILL sleeping right now!
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Yeah, though I walk through the valley of the Shadow of Death, I shall fear no evil, for yeah I am the meanest bitch in the valley....
Break this bittersweet spell on me
Lost in the arms of destiny!
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[link] please come visit
Love your way of describing this hun!
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Words are not capable of describing,
The injustice on this forsaken planet,
And I bet, as the end is nearing,
even the apocalypse can't cure it.
He's a good friend of my sister which is how he became my friend but I'm certainly not attracted to him!
However, the way he touched me was incredible! No guy has ever touched me like that! It actually felt as if he was memorising the feel of my skin, every curve and it felt as if he was worshipping me. He appeared to be mesmerised by my skin.
I'd LOVE for Lauri to touch me like that! If he did, I know that I'd do ANYTHING he asked of me. I'd be helpless! Any woman would!!!
Imaine him touching you so softly, it's like a whisper across your skin. His eyes darkened with desire for you so that they glitter like emeralds. He smiles at you in his sensual way and you know that he wouldn't be anywhere else then with you. Then imagine his lips brushing your skin in the same, slow, sensual manner that his fingertips had done only moments before.
Hay, that a great idea for a poem and a story!!! Please draw me a pic of it if you can. I'd be thrilled if you could.
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Yeah, though I walk through the valley of the Shadow of Death, I shall fear no evil, for yeah I am the meanest bitch in the valley....
Break this bittersweet spell on me
Lost in the arms of destiny!
Imagine, you and Lauri sit on the couch. His voice softly asks you to close your eyes.
You do so, and suddenly you feel his fingertips going ever so slightly over your knee, that you can barely feel it.
But... you do feel the warmth radiating from him very well as he leans in closer, keeping less than an inch distance from your body. He moans in your ear... and... THEN YOU GO ALL THE WAT!!! (argh argh argh I'm too perverted dammit)
GAHHH *pulls her hair*
I don't think I can draw what you described so amazingly there! But, I can always give it a try ^^
I'm making an adult slash pic tho, but it's between two OC characters.
How about and adult pic of Lintu & ... you name someone (it can be both girl & boy fcourse) ^^
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You're right, if you're not attracted to him then it's not that much fun, but I guess the touch must've felt good anyway ^^ (hehe XD, that sounds bad from me >_< )
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Words are not capable of describing,
The injustice on this forsaken planet,
And I bet, as the end is nearing,
even the apocalypse can't cure it.
I WANT HIM SO BADLY RIGHT NOW!!!!
I'm perverted too but I ain't shy about writing great detail.
Observe;
Lauri moans in your ear as his hand slowly but sensuously burns a fiery path along the inside of your thigh. His other hand goes to your neck and trails along your shoulders, pulling the collar of your shirt aside. his lips move from the sensitive spot below your ear, down your neck with aching slowness and he places soft kisses on your bare shoulder as he pulls one bra strap away from your skin. The hand that had been working it's way slowly up the inside of your thigh stops inches from the part of your body that had rapidly become warm and you moan with anticipation. "Easy, ihana. I plan to take my time. I have waited too long to touch you and I want to make very moment last." He whispers to you, causing you to imagine exactly what he could be planning to do with and to you. His hand inbetween your thighs went to the front of your shirt and he unbuttoned it slowly, a sensual smile on his lips as he watched your eyes darken, your breath catch and your skin to flush slightly. the cool air on your skin caused your nipples to bead and you gasped. Lauri's eyes burned with desire and he captured you mouth with his in a sinful kiss that left you breathless and yearning for him. When he pulled away, your shirt went with him and so did his. The sight of his bare chest just inches from you was a sight too tempting not to touch. You ran your hands over him, taking in every rise and dip of his majestic chest. He moaned and caught your wrists softly. "If you keep that up, I'll never get to finish what I want to do to you..." You groaned with desire and promised not to distract him anymore. He unbuttoned your jeans and pulled them down your legs, discarding them so that he could repeat the approch to the apex of your thighs by stroking the inside of them whisper softly. Before you could think, you were buck naked, stretched out on the sofa. Then Lauri took you into his arms and lay you on the floor, his body covering yours like a blanket. You couldn't help it when you moaned again as his hand went back to between your thighs. "Do you trust me, ihana?" "Yes..." you whisper to him, unable to find a voice any louder then that. With a sensual smile, Lauri's hand finally touched where you ached the most and you gasped with pleasure. He stroked you with the infinate care that he used when he played guitar and took you to heaven, catching you again when you returned to him. "Why did you do that?" You asked in wonder that he hadn't even thought about his own pleasure. He smiled at you in return and replied, "Because I only care about your pleasure. I wanted to watch you fly and to catch you when you returned to me. Watching you IS my pleasure." He stoked your hair as he answered and you couldn't resist pulling him to you, weanting him to feel every inch of you, wanting to feel every inch of him.
I'll leave the rest up to you.
Put Lauri with Ville.
Mmmmmmm two sexy Finnish front men!
Any drawing you can do for me will be greatly appreciated and treasured.
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Yeah, though I walk through the valley of the Shadow of Death, I shall fear no evil, for yeah I am the meanest bitch in the valley....
Break this bittersweet spell on me
Lost in the arms of destiny!
Girl! You're AmaZing!!!
You should really write more stories like that!!
Lauri with Ville, sounds HOT XD
Ok, I'll do that then
*runs off to get paper and pencil while thinking of a nice pose*
LOVE YOUUU!!!!
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Words are not capable of describing,
The injustice on this forsaken planet,
And I bet, as the end is nearing,
even the apocalypse can't cure it.
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